Can anyone fluent in French please check if what I've written is correct? Thanks.? - filmes de travestis online
Typically during the holidays I'm bored. Every year I go to the beach and I sunscreen. It is always the same. It was funny when I was little, but now when I swim every day, I think it's boring. It is not full of things to do and it angers me.
For example, last year I went to Mallorca in the car with my family. The trip was too far and inconvenient. How awful! Almost every day I was in the water all day, because there were too many people on the beach. In the afternoon, the sale of Sea I hate it. At night, there were mosquitoes every day and I'm with many of the bite alarm. It was very annoying. Also, there was too much noise, because there were many motorcycles. We chose to Aimee I was only eating.
Let's Caribbean, for there are beautiful beaches and lots of sun. Here is filmed "Pirates of the Caribbean" were.
Sunday, January 31, 2010
Filmes De Travestis Online Can Anyone Fluent In French Please Check If What I've Written Is Correct? Thanks.?
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I have an asterisk, for which I have corrected a word, a word or a comma.
They seem to be a girl, as such, you should (s) at the end of words. If you are a child, you need to) the (E and write "I will go with my friend" in the last paragraph.
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Normally * * followers leave, I'm bored. Every year I go to the beach and I tan * *. It is always the same. When I was little (e) * * It was fun, but now when I swim every day, is that I * can * Barbant. * It is not much to do * * *, and it annoys me.
For example, last year I went (e) * * Majorca by car with my family. The trip was too long * * and uncomfortable. How awful! Almost every day I was in the water all day, because there were too many people on the beach. * Afternoon * The sale of Sea I hate it. At night, there were mosquitoes, every day I'm awake (s) with plenty of bite * *. C'èTait very annoying. Also, there was too much noise, because there were many motorcycles. * * The only one I chose Aimee was the food.
Let's Caribbean, for there are beautiful beaches and lots of sun. That is, or * * * * the movie "Pirates of the Caribbean" * a * * *. Shot Summer
It is very beautiful and I love Johnny Depp car is beautiful and it is very good actor Nations.
I'm going with my boyfriend. We will travel by plane car is quick and easy. These pollutants, but the only means of transport, the right * * to the Caribbean's Voyager. It is very safe.
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"It is very Southern," means the same as "It is not very dangerous. Leave No need for both.
Otherwise, it's great!
Typically during the holidays I'm bored. Every year I go to the beach and I am Tan. This is always the same. When I was small, it was fun, but now when I swim every day, I think it's boring. There are many things to do, and that excites me. For example, last year I went to Mallorca with my family car. The trip was too far and inconvenient. Que horror! Almost every day I was in the water all day, because there were too many people on the beach. In the afternoon the water was dirty and did not like. The night was no mosquitoes, and every day I woke up with plenty of bite. It was very embarrassing. Therefore, the noise was not too much, because there were many motorcycles. The only thing I liked was the food. I want to visit in the Caribbean because it is beautiful beaches and lots of sun. Here, the "Pirates of the Caribbean" was filmed.
This is great, and I love Johnny Depp, who is beautiful and it is a very good actor. I'm going with my boyfriend. We want the aircraft for which I travel,It's quick and easy. There is pollution, but it is the only means of transport is good for travel to the West Indies. This is very safe and very dangerous.
in sorry, but this is the version that the site gives me, however, that not a very good word to
(in sorry, but this is the version of your site given me, he's not a very good word order)
Hello,
Here are the (few) corrections:
"I tan" I've held bronze, you can also write: "I go to the beach to sunbathe (something else).
"When I was little (if a little girl talk, and add the comma).
"I think it (or McCarthy) Barbant"
"There is not much (or Grand-chosen) to do" instead of "It's not full.
"Walk in Mallorca", "The trip was too long" ( "agree very long time" fully May). "How awful!" (Space before the exclamation mark, and before a colon, a semicolon, a question mark and the French quotation marks).
"The afternoon" instead of "Afternoon"
"I woke up (E, feminine, if a girl talks)
"Bites" rather than bite bite (be specific) for insects. The only "thing" instead of "you have only selected"
"That's where (the movie) Pirates of the Caribbean was filmed & quot;.
For the last sentence can be replaced with good interesting (Transportation interesting way to travel ...)
And by the way, congratulations! A very good text.
.. "I tan is bad, should say:" I tan "
DT said: "I find it to draw", but "I think it Barbant"
DT means "Mallorca", but "a Mallorca"
DT said: "The trip was too far", but "the journey was too long"
say "in the afternoon instead of" clock after twelve noon "
instead of "My aim is" to say "I wake up
Words of mosquito bites is "mosquito bites"
say "all" DT "said you have selected only" but "only selected"
sentecne end and said: "It's etc. .. or not."
Apart from that its good! and it makes sense! Well done!
.. "I tan is bad, should say:" I tan "
DT said: "I find it to draw", but "I think it Barbant"
DT means "Mallorca", but "a Mallorca"
DT said: "The trip was too far", but "the journey was too long"
say "in the afternoon instead of" clock after twelve noon "
instead of "My aim is" to say "I wake up
Words of mosquito bites is "mosquito bites"
say "all" DT "said you have selected only" but "only selected"
sentecne end and said: "It's etc. .. or not."
Apart from that its good! and it makes sense! Well done!
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